Hello {name}! Welcome to a new edition of Word Constructions’
newsletter!
With the reintroduction* of the newsletter, we have given it a new
name – Business Writing Ideas – and refined it. It will still
contain articles about good business communications, and will
include a regular section on writing basics to help you or your team
get the little details right.
July is a busy time of year for many businesses with annual tax
return tasks on top of normal operations, and even more so if the
financial year affects your business directly. I know I am heading
into annual report writing for clients, and starting to think about
Christmas promotions for another (I know it feels like 2010 just
started!)
Does your business have a formal style to build your brand? Is it
written down in one place or in bits and pieces, or maybe just in
someone’s head? I’m working on a style related project and am
curious as to what other businesses are doing so please let me know!
If you have any writing questions, please email me or add a comment
in my blog. Have a great month, and use your words wisely!
Tash
Recent blog posts you
may find useful:
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Keep your website looking fresh
* The newsletter was
temporarily halted while I was on maternity leave. My baby girl is
now 3 months old, a new financial year is starting, and Word
Constructions is back to full operations! So now is the time to ask
me about your writing projects…

The
way to get good ideas is to get lots of ideas, and throw the bad
ones away
- Dr Linus Pauling
Using sub-headings
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
Whether you are writing a
report, an article, web copy or even a letter, sub-headings can be
very useful. By using sub-headings, you make it
·
easier for a reader to skim read and
decide your document is relevant to them
·
easier for someone to find specific
information
·
visually interesting and appealing
·
less intimidating than a long, unbroken
document
·
easier to move between topics as you write
On a practical level,
sub-headings can also help you plan your document. I often write the
sub-headings for long documents and go back to add the information
as the sub-headings remind me of what I wanted to include.

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Don't forget the
basics ... when writing or managing a team
The value of
copyright
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
Did you know that as soon as you write or make something, it has
copyright? That means no one can copy it or use it in any way
without your permission. Yes, people break copyright everyday
without the slightest knowledge of what they are doing; for
instance, forwarding someone else's email is technically copyright
(one reason I invite you to forward this newsletter to friends is to
prevent you breaking copyright!)
When it comes to personal emails or a shopping list, you
probably aren't too worried about others copying it and breaking
your copyright. But what about when you put a lot of time into
writing an article or a review? In that case, the copyright of your
work is important. That doesn't mean you can't let people use your
work but just be aware of what your time and effort is worth.
Once you give or sell your copyright on a piece of work to
someone else, they have the power to change it, sell it, copy it
wherever they like and so on. You no longer have control over your
work. For major works, you can sell some of your copyright rather
than all of it - such as an author selling the book rights but not
the movie rights.
As an example, I offer free articles on my website, thereby
giving people permission to use those articles (as long as my name
remains with the article). However, I keep the copyright on those
articles and have the right to change them, copy them, sell them, or
whatever. Compare that to when I write something for a client and
give them the copyrights once it is finished so they can change it
as required and use it as they see fit. Obviously, they pay for the
copyright and exclusive use of my work.
If you are writing reviews, articles for promotional purposes,
remember that your copyright is precious. If someone wants to use
your work without paying for it (or by only paying a token amount),
then you probably want to keep the copyright on that
piece.

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Poor examples
Sometimes, the easiest
way to learn the correct way to do something is to see it done
poorly so in this section of my newsletter, I show you some
real-life examples of writing that need a little help.
This example comes from an email advertising a directory to business
owners - would you have paid money from this ad?
Example:
This manual will
become a valuable Business Directory
As all product listed
has a star rating
Which helps you when
deciding
on products for your business.
Issues with this
example:
This is a perfect example of someone not
checking their work and letting automated grammar checks do the
work for them. Note the capital letters for ‘as’ and ‘which’ are
there because of badly placed line breaks, not because there is any
need for a capital letter.
The seemingly random line break makes the message very disjointed,
especially with the last five words in a separate paragraph.
Was it a simple error to write ‘product’ instead of ‘products’, with
the grammar check suggesting ‘has’? Or did the writer not understand
‘all’ implies many and ‘product’ implies one?
Read as a single sentence, it is long without any punctuation to
make it easier to read.
To me, a manual and a directory are very different – one provides
instructions while the other provides a listing of information – so
how does a manual become a directory?
A better version would
be: (without changing the meaning)
This business directory will become a valuable asset as all
listed products have a star rating to help you decide on products
for your business.
With some more refining:
This business directory will be a valuable
decision making tool as each product listing includes a star rating.
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