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Content and message must match

Friday, December 16th, 2011

Whatever your message is, your content must be consistent as well.

One of my favourite writing tasks is helping Santa write letters each Christmas at Love Santa. They are fun, positive letters and I know that each one will bring smiles and extend the Christmas joy.

Of course, sometimes people feel that they get too old for Santa and question their belief in him and the magic of Christmas.

Like many others, Love Santa has some information available to help people (parents in particular) to encourage people to keep their belief in Santa. The information is written with care to give tips on encouraging but also be read by those in doubt without any additional cause to doubt (and yes, this blog post is also being carefully written!)

Others are not so careful. I just read an article with ‘easy ways to keep your child believing in Santa’ that spends the first few paragraphs destroying any doubts before giving the five tips. Any doubting child reading it would no longer be influenced by those useful tips so the purpose would be lost – and don’t assume kids don’t read articles aimed for parents!

This makes a clear example of how the presentation of information through choice of words, headings and images can support or contradict the intent and content of the writing. Sure it is harder to write so that the entire message is consistent and acceptable for all potential readers, but it will serve the purpose much better and will be appreciated by those looking for the information.

What examples have you seen of a message not supporting itself? Or maybe you have a Santa story to share (although personal stories are best shared at Love Santa’s blog!)?

Lint & lollies in your website?

Wednesday, October 20th, 2010

Have you ever seen the lint, lolly wrappers and old (hopefully unused!) tissues in the bottom of a handbag due for a clean out?

Lea uses that analogy for websites – many have too much old clutter that is hard to find, but are greatly improved by a tidy up. I like the analogy and it reminded me of a particular website. (more…)

A change is as good…

Tuesday, November 13th, 2007

As a professional writer, most of my work is commercial – I write business profiles, articles, webcopy, brochures, letters and so on. But every so often, I write something completely different, and I love the variety.Beach holiday

Recently, I have have had a few ‘different’ projects.

First, I wrote some letters to help out Santa as he likes sending Australian letters to Aussie boys & girls (instead of talking about snow and ice) – personalised letters from Love Santa are definitely professionally written, lol!

QuickCrafts Onlineis producing a set of books for children about Australian animals and I have been editing the stories to suit the under 5 age group – although I always write in simple terms, I had to use even simpler vocabulary and ideas for that age group!

Real Mums is about reality parentingso they wanted some Santa letters for Mums. These were fun as they need to be humourous and aimed at Mums while maintaining a Santa feel in case the kids read mum’s mail!

It is fun to be involved in projects with such different types of writing!

Boxy Design

Friday, November 2nd, 2007

I have just done some writing work for a new client who have developed a cool product range for kinder & primary school kids – as a Mum I think it’s cool anyway!

Boxy Design has a backpack with an insulated section of carrying lunchboxes and a separate section for reader colvers and papers, etc; a lunch box that fits fruit and a roll or sandwiches, and is air tight so no wrappings are needed (my green soul loves that!); a cold pack and a drink bottle.

It is so much easier and more fun to write about products/businesses that are innovative or hit a real need for consumers! What do you prefer writing about?

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